濟(jì)南別墅裝修
Steve Jobs is the person I admire most. In 1976 Jobs and friends founded Apple computer company, he accompanied the apple decades of ups and downs and Renaissance. He is affectionately known as" the godfather of apple". But the unfortunate thing happened in Beijing in October 6, 2011, he depart from the world for ever, at the age of 56.史蒂夫·喬布斯是我最崇拜的人。1976年喬布斯和朋友成立蘋果電腦公司，他陪伴了蘋果公司數(shù)十年的起落與復(fù)興.他被人親切的稱為“蘋果教父”。但是不幸的事還是發(fā)生了，他于北京時(shí)間2011年10月6日與世長(zhǎng)辭，享年56歲。
悠游肚肚熊
An Australian, whose name is Allan Stewart born on March seventh 1915, [was] bestowed the world record concerning the oldest person to get [a] master’s degree in 2006. "The" 用錯(cuò)了，2006 用past tense，改was使句子通暢According to Allan‘s perspective, his attitude of learning is“[it is never too late to challenge yourself]”.[we know that刪去]....另外改寫了後半句使句子通暢To prove what he [had said], Allen got his first degree in 1936 ,and soon after, [got] the second one ----- the [Doctor of Medicine]一言既出，時(shí)態(tài)須變 get==>got 保持時(shí)態(tài)一致 medicine doctor會(huì)產(chǎn)生歧義.(doctor有醫(yī)生一解，改大寫+of破之)At the age [around] 80, he decided to study law. [At the same year,] he was given the master’s degree of law, which was his third one. 見4..Just in 2012, he [had] obtained not only the last degree by [studying] through the internet, but [also] the praise from his teacher,for his [habit] of planning learning-time properly.2012年十分遙遠(yuǎn)了，let the past to be the past吧..... 通過"網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)"這是名詞吧?studied =>studyinghobbit....LZ最近電影看多了1. No problem2. 可分可不分，但根據(jù)Lz的標(biāo)點(diǎn)..不分3. 沒差4. 80時(shí)~有明確時(shí)間，普通past tense可以了...另外斷句改了而且前後沒有因果關(guān)系(因?yàn)闆Q定了所以學(xué)位到手了!?)，於是改了5. 改了
小樓新雨
第一篇 Everyone's heart have a hero,maybe a person who save the people,maybe a animal who have got good spirit. So far,I can't forget a person who helped plenty of people.His name is Leifeng.I think he was a good person I can't understand why he was so friendly,but I really know,he was a hero in my heart.I looked up upon him.and I will do all things I can do,I want to be the 2nd Leifeng.第二篇Li zhunji, My HeroHave you seen the Korean TV series call “Hero”? The hero of the story is a actor called Lizhunji. Lizhunji, he is my hero. I admire most of the characters he acted in the movies and TV dramas, such as the romantic and free spirited Xu Zheng yu in “My Girl”, the tough man in “the times of the wolf and dog”, and the legendary hero in “the plum blossom”. Beside this, I admire him as an actor. He challenges himself as an actor and chooses to act totally different type of rolls. He said to his fans, “If one day I forgot my dream and chased after money and fame, I wouldn’t be me anymore. Please abandon me then.”I’m not an actor, but I want to be like him to challenge myself and live in the dream to achieve, not to sit back and enjoy the success.李準(zhǔn)基，我的偶像你看過一部叫做《英雄》的韓劇嗎？這個(gè)故事中的主角就是一個(gè)叫做李準(zhǔn)基的演員演的，他就是我的偶像。我喜愛他演的大部分電視劇和電影中的角色。《我的女孩》中浪漫又富有自由精神的徐政宇，《狼與狗的時(shí)間》中的硬漢，還有傳奇性的人物《一枝梅》。除此之外，我還欣賞他做為一個(gè)演員，挑戰(zhàn)自身，演完全不同的角色。他對(duì)影迷們說：“有一天如果我忘記了我的夢(mèng)想開始追求金錢和名譽(yù)而演戲，我就不再是我了，你們就拋棄我吧?！蔽也皇茄輪T，但我愿意像他一樣挑戰(zhàn)自身，為夢(mèng)想和成就而生，而不是松懈和享受成功。第三篇The person I admire is my mum. She is an English teacher. She is very popular among the students because she spends lots of time on her lessons and has a good sense of humor. Students all enjoy her class. My mum is not only a good teacher, but also a great mother. She is patient with me and always smiling while talking. My mum teaches me how to think independently and helps me to build up my confidence. When I have some difficulties in my studies, it is my mum who encourages me to work until I solve the problem. When Im feeling sad or bad, it is also my mum who looks after
Candice18611
這是我?guī)土硪粋€(gè)人寫的文章,也適用于你的這個(gè)題目.To me,a suerhero is definitey someone who selflessly helps those who are in need.And so today,I would like to introduce to you someone I hold as the greatest and most superb hero in my heart - my uncle.Many people have uncles,but I think mine is different,and unique.He has a very special job - a fire fighter.Being a fire fighter means that he puts his life on the line whenever he is called for duty.Each battle with a burning building,or each rescue mission of someone trapped in the debris of a collapsed building spells nothing but risks and danger,yet he puts his own safety aside,and dashes into the danger zones over and over again,saving numerous lives.It is an understatement to call him a hero.He is just like any other uncles who dotes on his nephews and nieces.He buys toys for me,and even takes care of me when he isn't on shift and my parents need help looking after me because they are usually always on overseas business trips.He isn't married,so all his love for children and kids are devoted towards me.I am really appreciative of all that he has done not just for me and my family,but also for the many families and lives he has saved,and will save in the future.
吃貨在學(xué)廚
Edison was born in America.When he was a child, many people thought that he was not good, in fact, he was full of thinking. He did a lot for the world, he owned over one thousand inventions."The genius contists of one percent inspiration and ninty-nine percent sweat." Although I can't be Edison, I can learn hardworking from him.愛迪生出生在美國(guó),小時(shí)候被認(rèn)為不值得教育的孩子,事實(shí)上他是個(gè)充滿想象力的孩子。他為世界做出了貢獻(xiàn),擁有1000多項(xiàng)發(fā)明。是百分之一的靈感加百分之九十九的汗水。”雖然我不能成為愛迪生,但可以學(xué)習(xí)他的努力與堅(jiān)韌。
木糖不純
Thomas then worked for five years as a telegraph operator, but he continued to spend much of his time on the job conducting experiments. He got his first patent in 1868 for a vote recorder run by electricity. However, the vote recorder was not a success. In 1870, he sold another invention, a stock-ticker, for $40,000. A stock-ticker is a machine that automatically prints stock prices on a tape. He was then able to build his first shop in Newark, New Jersey.Thomas Edison was totally deaf in one ear and hard of hearing in the other, but thought of his deafness as a blessing in many ways. It kept conversations short, so that he could have more time for work. He called himself a "two-shift man" because he worked 16 out of every 24 hours. Sometimes he worked so intensely that his wife had to remind him to sleep and eat.Thomas Edison died at the age of 84 on October 18, 1931, at his estate in West Orange, New Jersey. He left numerous inventions that improved the quality of life all over the world.愛迪生 (1847-1931) bai19世紀(jì)被譽(yù)為科學(xué)的世du紀(jì)，也是以科學(xué)的技術(shù)化和社會(huì)化為突出特zhi征的世紀(jì)。dao科學(xué)在這個(gè)世紀(jì)開始成為社會(huì)生活的一個(gè)重要組成部分。風(fēng)起云涌的偉大創(chuàng)新轉(zhuǎn)變成為技術(shù)科學(xué)的巨大威力。這個(gè)世紀(jì)的一些科技巨擘繼續(xù)活躍于20世紀(jì)。托馬斯·阿爾沃·愛迪生（Thomas Alva Edison）,就是其中之一。美國(guó)《生活》周刊不久前評(píng)出的過去1000年的100位最有影響力人物中，愛迪生名列第一。愛迪生出身低微、生活貧困，他的“學(xué)歷”是一生只上過3個(gè)月的小學(xué)，老師因?yàn)榭偙凰殴值膯栴}問得張口結(jié)舌，竟然當(dāng)他母親的面說他是個(gè)傻瓜、將來不會(huì)有什么出息。母親一氣之下讓他退學(xué)，由她親自教育。這時(shí)，愛迪生的天資得以充分地展露。在母親指導(dǎo)下，他閱讀了大量的書籍，并在家中自己建了一個(gè)小實(shí)驗(yàn)室。為籌措實(shí)驗(yàn)室的必要開支，他只得外出打工，當(dāng)報(bào)童、辦報(bào)紙。最后用積攢的錢在火車的行李車廂建了個(gè)小實(shí)驗(yàn)室，繼續(xù)作化學(xué)實(shí)驗(yàn)研究。后來，化學(xué)藥品起火，幾乎把這個(gè)車廂燒掉。暴怒的行李員把愛迪生的實(shí)驗(yàn)設(shè)備都扔下車去，還打了他幾記耳光,據(jù)說愛迪生因此終生致聾。愛迪生是美利堅(jiān)民族崇尚的那種傳奇般的人物——雖未受過良好的學(xué)校教育，但憑個(gè)人奮斗和非凡才智獲得巨大成功。他自學(xué)成才，以堅(jiān)韌不拔的毅力、罕有的熱情和精力從千萬(wàn)次的失敗中站了起來，克服了數(shù)不清的困難，成為美國(guó)發(fā)明家、企業(yè)家。他早年曾制定雙工式和四工式電報(bào)系統(tǒng)，發(fā)明自動(dòng)電報(bào)幫電機(jī)。1877～1879年發(fā)明留聲機(jī)；實(shí)驗(yàn)并改進(jìn)了電燈（白熾燈）和電話。以后又制定了照明系統(tǒng)，并為實(shí)現(xiàn)集中供電進(jìn)行了許多工作。他提出并采用直流三線系統(tǒng)。制成當(dāng)時(shí)容量最大的發(fā)電機(jī)，并于1882年利用該機(jī)建成了第一座大型發(fā)電廠。在同時(shí)期，作了鐵道電氣化的試驗(yàn)。1883年發(fā)現(xiàn)“愛迪生效應(yīng)”，即熱電子發(fā)射現(xiàn)象。在電影技術(shù)、礦業(yè)、建筑、化工等方面也有不少著名的發(fā)明，僅從1869年到1901年，就取得了1328項(xiàng)發(fā)明專利。在他的一生中，平均每15天就有一項(xiàng)新發(fā)明，他因此而被譽(yù)為“發(fā)明大王”。愛迪生獻(xiàn)身科學(xué)、淡泊名利。在研制電燈時(shí)，記者對(duì)他說：“如果你真能造出電燈來取代煤氣燈，那你一定會(huì)賺大錢?！睈鄣仙卮鹫f：“一個(gè)人如果僅僅為積攢金錢而工作，他就很難得到一點(diǎn)別的東西——甚至連金錢也得不到！”他一直被稱作現(xiàn)代電影之父，可是在電影界人士為他77歲壽辰舉行的盛大宴會(huì)上，他說：“對(duì)于電影的發(fā)展，我只是在技術(shù)上出了點(diǎn)力，其他的都是別人的功勞?！睈鄣仙亟箝_闊、善處逆境。針對(duì)自己的耳聾不便，他說：“走在百老匯的人群中，我可以像幽居森林深處的人那樣平靜。耳聾從來就是我的福氣，它使我免去了許多干擾和精神痛苦。”1914年某天晚上，愛迪生的電影實(shí)驗(yàn)室突遭火災(zāi)，損失巨大。愛迪生安慰傷心之極的妻子說：“不要緊，別看我已67歲了，可我并不老。從明天早晨起，一切都將重新開始，我相信沒有一個(gè)人會(huì)老得不能重新開始工作的?！钡诙?，愛迪生不但開始動(dòng)工建造新車間，而且又開始發(fā)明一種新的燈——一種幫助消防隊(duì)員在黑暗中前進(jìn)的便攜式探照燈?；馂?zāi)對(duì)愛迪生就像是一支小小的插曲。愛迪生造福大眾、不畏艱辛。為尋找燈絲，他試驗(yàn)了數(shù)千種材料；為試制一種新的蓄電池，他失敗了八千次。因此，愛迪生常常說：“天才是百分之一的靈感加上百分之九十九的勤奮?！彼?0歲時(shí)，仍然保持著發(fā)明家的精神，堅(jiān)張地進(jìn)行著發(fā)明創(chuàng)造活動(dòng)。1927年，他成立了愛迪生植物研究公司，投入一個(gè)嶄新的研究領(lǐng)域，尋覓化工新材料。81歲高齡的愛迪生成功地從野草中提煉出橡膠，受到人們極高的評(píng)價(jià)。
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