做夢的燕子
寫作思路：寫出網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，對于優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，分開舉例說明。正文：With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers,shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life.譯文：隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展和計(jì)算機(jī)的普及，網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)成為我們生活中的一個(gè)普遍的問題。Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.譯文：在這里，消費(fèi)者可以買到他們所需要的一切。Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience.譯文：網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處，其中最重要的也許是它的方便。People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.譯文：人們不必浪費(fèi)大量的精力和寶貴的時(shí)間去從一個(gè)商店到另一個(gè)選擇他們喜歡的商品。This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person.譯文：這對于那些不能親自去商店的老人、病人和忙碌的人來說尤其可取。The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet.譯文：這些貨物在網(wǎng)上的各種形狀,大小和顏色都有。All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses.譯文：所有他們需要做的是坐在電腦前點(diǎn)擊鼠標(biāo)。The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.譯文：他們所訂購的商品將及時(shí)送到他們的。However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages.譯文：然而，在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上購物也有其缺點(diǎn)。The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally.譯文：第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)是消費(fèi)者看不到商品或者親自試用。Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer.譯文：有時(shí)候，真正的商品可能不一樣，因?yàn)樗麄冊陔娔X上看到的。The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered.譯文：其次是一些商店在網(wǎng)上沒有注冊。They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you.譯文：在他們從你得到的錢之后,他們永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)給你提供任何東西。Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.譯文：一旦被欺騙，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)你無處可去抱怨。
MissAlice1203
More and more people begin to shop online. Of course there are many advantages . First it can save much time ,especially for those who are busy with their work . Second it is convenient and you don'
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Nowadays, there is an increasing number of people who shop online. Some people think that it is easy to shop online instead of going to shopping malls and stores. There are many different kinds of goods online, and people and search for what they want easily. So they don't have to spend time looking for what they want. However, online shopping may be harmful because those goods may not have good quality. When things are broken, it is also very difficult to find people who are responsible for repair.如今，越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物。有些人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)上購物比逛商場和商店容易。網(wǎng)上有很多不同種類的商品，人們可以很容易地找到他們想要的。所以他們不必花時(shí)間去尋找他們想要的東西。然而，網(wǎng)上購物可能是有害的，因?yàn)檫@些商品可能沒有好的質(zhì)量。當(dāng)東西壞了，也很難找到負(fù)責(zé)修理的人。如今，越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物。有些人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)上購物比逛商場和商店容易。網(wǎng)上有很多不同種類的商品，人們可以很容易地找到他們想要的。所以他們不必花時(shí)間去尋找他們想要的東西。然而，網(wǎng)上購物可能是有害的，因?yàn)檫@些商品可能沒有好的質(zhì)量。當(dāng)東西壞了，也很難找到負(fù)責(zé)修理的人。
毓毓baby
一、寫作思路
這是一道辨析題，所以內(nèi)容需要全面，既包括網(wǎng)購的好處，也包括網(wǎng)購的壞處，形成對比。開頭可以直接帶出話題，比如我認(rèn)為網(wǎng)購的利弊主要體現(xiàn)在這幾個(gè)方面，中間展開好處和壞處，各列舉一下觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)尾提出關(guān)于網(wǎng)購的建議。
二、雙語寫作范文參考
三、雙語寫作模板參考
趙鵬飛1976
關(guān)于網(wǎng)購利弊的英語作文Recently, my house is out of a new, my mother began to shopping on the Internet.Around this time, the network shopping gradually in vogue, age nearly middle-aged mother also unwilling to lag behind, for a while, before she accidentally got a shopping site ebay site, surprisingly, she also played on, mom was transformed from the original "online chat" into "online shopping", then, my mom to launched "Ann tenpay" online, then there is a succession of saving money. But, after all, online shopping also has the advantages of online shopping, if will not have to become a drowned rat on a rainy day, if you don't want to run errands, can also be at home while enjoying a chicken leg web station.On one occasion, I want to buy clothes, mom I know drive will be here soon, she said: "son, how about we go online to buy ah?" Once I listen to, bother to promise. I went to the Internet a look, ah! What a lot of clothes here ah, really is multifarious, careful see, everything is so beautiful, after careful screening, I didn't set a cheap and easy dress, after press ok, ok! All finished.Ah, online shopping is convenient, not only affordable, and good quality, it is kill two birds with one stone really.近來，我家出了一件新鮮事――我媽媽開始在網(wǎng)上購物了。 這一陣子，網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物漸漸在各地風(fēng)行起來，歲數(shù)以近中年的媽媽也不甘落后，前一陣子，她無意中得到了一個(gè)購物網(wǎng)站易趣的網(wǎng)址，想不到，她竟也玩上了，媽媽便從原來的“網(wǎng)上聊天族”變成了“網(wǎng)上購物族”，緊接著，媽媽去網(wǎng)上開通了“安付通”，然后便是接連不斷的存錢。但網(wǎng)上購物畢竟也有網(wǎng)上購物的好處，要是下雨天就不用變成落湯雞了，如果不想跑腿，也可以在家里一邊享受雞腿一邊逛網(wǎng)站。有一次，我想買衣服穿，媽媽一知道勁頭馬上就來了，她說：“兒子，我們一起去網(wǎng)上買怎么樣呀?”我一聽，連聲答應(yīng)。我來到網(wǎng)上一看，啊!這里的衣服真多呵，真可謂五花八門，仔細(xì)一看，每一件都這么漂亮，經(jīng)過精心篩選之后，我才定下一件又便宜又大方的服裝，按確定以后，ok!一切完成了。呵，網(wǎng)上購物真方便，不但價(jià)格實(shí)惠，而且質(zhì)量上乘，真是一舉兩得。
燈神的精靈
寫作思路：題目《網(wǎng)購的利弊》，可以采用分-總的結(jié)構(gòu)。前面兩段分開寫，首段寫網(wǎng)購的利，第二段寫網(wǎng)購的弊端，最后簡單寫網(wǎng)購的注意事項(xiàng)。這樣就可以詳細(xì)的讓讀者知道具體的利弊都有哪些，文章內(nèi)容就是比較充實(shí)的了。
雙語范文參考
寫作模板參考
木易小青爭
寫作思路及要點(diǎn)：圍繞網(wǎng)上購物，舉出網(wǎng)上購物的利與弊，最后總結(jié)自己的想法。
Nowadays, online shopping has become one of the most popular ways of shopping. Going out shopping has become a kind of leisure walk.
如今，網(wǎng)購已經(jīng)成為人們的.熱門購物方式之一，出門購物已經(jīng)成為一種休閑時(shí)的散步。
There are many advantages of online shopping. It can "go shopping" at home, ordering is not limited by time and place.
網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)有很多。它可以在家“逛商店”，訂貨不受時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)的限制。
It gets a lot of commodity information and can buy goods that are not available locally. It can save time and effort from ordering, buying goods to goods door-to-door without visiting the scene.
它獲得較大量的商品信息，可以買到當(dāng)?shù)貨]有的商品。它從訂貨、買貨到貨物上門無需親臨現(xiàn)場，既省時(shí)又省力。
To sum up, it can be seen that online shopping breaks through the barriers of traditional business, and has great attraction and influence on consumers, enterprises and the market. In the new economic era, it is undoubtedly an ideal mode to achieve "multi win" effect.
綜上可以看出，網(wǎng)上購物突破了傳統(tǒng)商務(wù)的障礙，無論對消費(fèi)者、企業(yè)還是市場都有著巨大的吸引力和影響力，在新經(jīng)濟(jì)時(shí)期無疑是達(dá)到“多贏”效果的理想模式。
However, online shopping has many disadvantages. Online shopping can only be seen photos, to the goods really arrive in the hand, will feel different from the physical, which is not as good as in the mall to buy at ease. Network payment is not secure, may be peeping, password stolen.
但是，網(wǎng)購還有許多缺點(diǎn)。網(wǎng)購只能是看到照片，到貨物真的到達(dá)手里，會(huì)感覺和實(shí)物有不一樣，這就不如在商場里買到的放心。網(wǎng)絡(luò)支付不安全，可能被偷窺，密碼被盜。
And the delivery is too slow. Although the speed of EMS is faster than that of the past, buyers still have to wait for a few days. Online shopping also can't experience the leisure of shopping and chatting with relatives and friends.
而且收貨太慢，盡管現(xiàn)在EMS的速度已經(jīng)比以前的郵寄快了不知多少倍，畢竟買家還是要等上幾天。網(wǎng)購也不能和親戚朋友一起體會(huì)逛街閑聊的悠閑。
I don't think online shopping is better than shopping. We should reduce or strengthen the security of online shopping.
我認(rèn)為網(wǎng)購不比逛街好，應(yīng)該減少網(wǎng)購或加強(qiáng)網(wǎng)購的安全性。
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